Would you want to read my book?

wow, this is so descriptive and i can see it in my head as i read. I love the beginning and i would definitely buy this book if you published it! The only thing that bugged me was i didn't have a clue as to what they were talking about. If you could put a bit more detail about that in this chapter or in the ones after it, i think this book would have soooooo much potential! Don't put anymore out on the internet though cuz i don't think you would want it stolen!