Cody Stringham
Friday, December 23, 2011
I think that there is no cohesion between the sentence "we give thanks for what is..." with the rest of the
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I would agree with you. It seems to be misplaced in the paragraph. What are people giving thanks for? It is not mentioned in the paragraph, unless the idea if developed in the next sentences.
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